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Chris Lites's avatar

I think I first picked up your trail at Chuck's old site, The Cult, which was, in a minor way, an early internet version of a pysch hospital. I made many friends there, had a relationship of questionable judgement, and continued my own descent into drugs and alcohol. I figured you'd done much the same. I'm glad we both saw the other side, at least for now, and writing again. I'm happy you're back.

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This is a powerful piece, could be the Introduction, or a Forward to the novel. It does two things very well. First, it introduces the cast of characters, the patients at least, might want to expand to include a short list of key staff. Second, it not only introduces you, but it qualifies you, provides the credentials that give your stories authenticity and authority.

I've learned that combat veterans generally don't want to talk about their experiences with anybody but other vets. Those eleven years are as close to military combat as one can get, outside an active fire zone. Your willingness to share it opens a whole world to readers. There are many aspects of modern life that we tend to avoid seeing inside--like slaughterhouses--and mental health institutions.

Prolonged stimulation of sensory nerves causes diminished sensation, adaptation which creates a new normal. Removal of the stimulation is then perceived as abnormal. Your adaptation to life in the unit made life outside seem abnormal. Neurophysiology at work.

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